Quinn Mobley

Sample essay 1:

*Great word choice 

Great main points and explanations

Ties non academic and academic writings together with examples

Don’t like use of the first person

Citations were correctly  done

Sample essay 2:

Didn’t have a title page

Not much of an introduction 

Was not the word requirement

Wasn’t structured well

Weren’t many citations 

Work cited page didn’t have it’s own page

Sample essay three:

Great word choice and a good introduction 

Very good explanations of non academic and academic

Great length

Sources page was a the end

Sample essay 4:

Great introduction but don’t like first person writing

In text citation 

Interesting end page

Sources page

Good word choice

Sampleessay 5:

Good title page

Sorces

Work cited page

Correct citation

Sample essay 6:

Sources

Paragraph